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[-{Z}- ACommonDayInHeaven]

I think its more of an ambient track because you used pretty dominant pads. But i like it! maybe its a bit too repetitive, so tweak a couple of knobs and automate it so its different a bit, but the loop sounds really sweet! if you added more bass to the kick drum and cut off the low ends on everything else it would have a bouncier feel, but overall i think its a pretty dank facking piece dude. really catchy
Keep up the good work

TheZaaL responds:

WTH!! Another review!! Thanks, man!

Yeah, I'm actually (re)working on it, it will be much more clear, plus some other candies!!

Getting the kick bouncier is a great idea! I will just change the whole kick!

[Stream Line]

i really liked how the pad and the voices blended in together! it was really relaxing listening to this.
Keep up the good work!

MrKittie responds:

Thanks man i really appreciate it! Look forward my first album coming next month!

[Apathetic]

I really like the experimental/dark feeling to the song. Indeed this is a lot more than a 7 second loop! I really like the drums that you used. where did you get the drumn samples? 2 19 the breakdown part is my favorite it sounds SWWEEEEETTTTT HOLY SHIKES IM GOING NUTS.
Anyways (calmed down from head bobbing a bit) Keep up the good work. I like it!

ljkDICKJUSTICE responds:

I used the Vengeance Future House Vol. 1 drum Pack for the kicks, and I used the Deadmau5 Xfer samplepack for everything else!
I'm gonna make some more music like this, i didn't think i would get such great reviews!!!
Check out the rest of my stuff when you get the chance!!!
WOOP!!!!!

[DubDustrial]

Wait. no comments needed. this is awesome.
I really love the trippy soundscapes and the white noise. You gotta teach me that some day! ive been looking everywhere to get that sound you got there! and yeeah. mixing does help a lot man!
Keep up the good work

BowserThedestructive responds:

Oh yeah doing it is pretty easy how ever in this I edited a pre-made whitenoise intro sweep. But I do know how to make a whitenoise sweep if I had to make one from scratch. Thanks for the comment.

[I-Saved-The-World: Testing]

Wow.

Wow the intro guitar(ish sound) and the saw wave matches so well together!
This sounds really awesome! Its very close to some of Glitch Mob's songs
I think you should add something else on at 0:22 and the second chorus part...at 0:22 it sounds a bit empty and at the second chorus part it sounds repetitive. Maybe have that variated synth from the beginning?
Def make it longer! It will sounds really cool once its done! Maybe add a longer bridge part so that the chorus part hits the listener harder and its more pumping (if you know what i mean...)
Keep up the good work!

I-Saved-The-World responds:

Wow being compared to the glitch mob is pretty rad :) They're one of my many inspirations for creating music. at 56s this is a pretty short song, maybe one day i'll make it longer?
-ISTW

[Beat me Up]

Nice drums!

I love the funk! It sounds so good with the drums!
I just feel like you can work on the opening of the guitar funk part. It sounds a bit...empty. Maybe adding a sine wave or start off with the bass guitar from the beginning instead of adding it on later?
The claps and piano sounds awesome at 1:08!
Keep up the good work.

nobodolopez responds:

thanks bro, i love it when people give me some criticism to help me make better music, and thanks for the tips :)

[[Pseudohouse]]

The intro....SO GOOD!

The Intro synth pluck chord progression sounds really good! But when you added the kicks into it, i think the song was a bit...too sidekicked. If you made the synth yourself, i think you should lower the filter on it, and make it more saw-wave style(a slight saw wave. Not too heavy) Maybe do something like what you did at 2:05-2:38? That part sounded really good!
But I think everything else sounds good! i like where you put the white noise in, and nice build up! Nice job on the synth bleeps. I enjoyed it.
Keep up the Good work

Xyresic responds:

I pumped this out in about a day or so, so I'm probably not going to make many changes, but I'll definitely take your advice into consideration for the next time I do something like this. Thanks for the review!

[Your World - Re-upload]

Awesome Intro!

The intro is awesome! it really makes me get pumped, but then...I feel like the drop shouldnt be as heavy...It should have some melodic components to it to make it sound more organized. And im pretty sure it will be heavy enough with your kick-ass drums haha. Maybe add a heavy saw wave using the same melodies as the intro?
One critique with your drums:
I think you should add more to your kick drum. It lacks the "thump" in it. Try adding an EQ to the kick and raise the bass.
But this sounds really good! very close to tiesto's style.
Keep up the good work.

EternalEndeavor responds:

one of the best critiques ever man, I will definetly go back and see if i can fix what you mentioned, thank you =]

[Water Magic]

Nice drums

Its a shame you dont want to finish this song it sounds great so far!
I think you should work on this once more. Try adding a bass in the beginning, maybe a low sub-bass or sine-wave synth? The drum breakdown towards the end sounds really good with the voice!
Keep up the good work!

eatmeatleet responds:

thanks, I'll consider continuing it

[Thats_What_She_Said]

Work On the Drums!

The song is musically pretty much complete. I think its laid out nicely, but i think you should raise the Bass on the kick drum A LOT more. For example, try adding on an EQ to the drums, and raising the bass. There will be more thump to the song, and i think it would be more of a "Dance" Song

DJSKY24 responds:

Hey, thanks for the feedback :) Your right, it definitely needs more umph