That was really really good....Like a lot better than my expectations. Keep working on the song! its going to be awesome! 5/5
Maybe change up the synths for the main lead a bit.. or adding empty space to make it jumpy would be a good change-up. I just thought it was a bit too repetitive, but the loop itself was fantastic.
thank you very much!
that means a lot, i also love your work!!!
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Dude the part at 23 seconds really stoked me. i really liked how it had a ghosty-feel to it. and the acoustic drums sound really good with the song! maybe be a bit less repetitive with the main lead? if you changed up the notes on every 4th loop sequence it would make it a more prosuasive loop.
Anyhow, keep up the good work!
Oh, and add more punch to the bass drums maybe. layer it up with a clubby bass drum to get the heavy bass hit. I think that will make the song cooler (or on your future tracks)
Thanks for your comment man :) I've been working with drum samples a lot more lately, I used to use a VST plug in to write my drums but I'll probably be using a mixture of that and some drum samples I got that are way more punchy! And you're right about variation in the sequences, I got lazy with this one cause I was half asleep all the way through :P But I'll make way more effort on the next one :)
I think its more of an ambient track because you used pretty dominant pads. But i like it! maybe its a bit too repetitive, so tweak a couple of knobs and automate it so its different a bit, but the loop sounds really sweet! if you added more bass to the kick drum and cut off the low ends on everything else it would have a bouncier feel, but overall i think its a pretty dank facking piece dude. really catchy
Keep up the good work
WTH!! Another review!! Thanks, man!
Yeah, I'm actually (re)working on it, it will be much more clear, plus some other candies!!
Getting the kick bouncier is a great idea! I will just change the whole kick!
i really liked how the pad and the voices blended in together! it was really relaxing listening to this.
Keep up the good work!
Thanks man i really appreciate it! Look forward my first album coming next month!
I really like the experimental/dark feeling to the song. Indeed this is a lot more than a 7 second loop! I really like the drums that you used. where did you get the drumn samples? 2 19 the breakdown part is my favorite it sounds SWWEEEEETTTTT HOLY SHIKES IM GOING NUTS.
Anyways (calmed down from head bobbing a bit) Keep up the good work. I like it!
I used the Vengeance Future House Vol. 1 drum Pack for the kicks, and I used the Deadmau5 Xfer samplepack for everything else!
I'm gonna make some more music like this, i didn't think i would get such great reviews!!!
Check out the rest of my stuff when you get the chance!!!
WOOP!!!!!
Wait. no comments needed. this is awesome.
I really love the trippy soundscapes and the white noise. You gotta teach me that some day! ive been looking everywhere to get that sound you got there! and yeeah. mixing does help a lot man!
Keep up the good work
Oh yeah doing it is pretty easy how ever in this I edited a pre-made whitenoise intro sweep. But I do know how to make a whitenoise sweep if I had to make one from scratch. Thanks for the comment.
Wow.
Wow the intro guitar(ish sound) and the saw wave matches so well together!
This sounds really awesome! Its very close to some of Glitch Mob's songs
I think you should add something else on at 0:22 and the second chorus part...at 0:22 it sounds a bit empty and at the second chorus part it sounds repetitive. Maybe have that variated synth from the beginning?
Def make it longer! It will sounds really cool once its done! Maybe add a longer bridge part so that the chorus part hits the listener harder and its more pumping (if you know what i mean...)
Keep up the good work!
Wow being compared to the glitch mob is pretty rad :) They're one of my many inspirations for creating music. at 56s this is a pretty short song, maybe one day i'll make it longer?
-ISTW
Nice drums!
I love the funk! It sounds so good with the drums!
I just feel like you can work on the opening of the guitar funk part. It sounds a bit...empty. Maybe adding a sine wave or start off with the bass guitar from the beginning instead of adding it on later?
The claps and piano sounds awesome at 1:08!
Keep up the good work.
thanks bro, i love it when people give me some criticism to help me make better music, and thanks for the tips :)
The intro....SO GOOD!
The Intro synth pluck chord progression sounds really good! But when you added the kicks into it, i think the song was a bit...too sidekicked. If you made the synth yourself, i think you should lower the filter on it, and make it more saw-wave style(a slight saw wave. Not too heavy) Maybe do something like what you did at 2:05-2:38? That part sounded really good!
But I think everything else sounds good! i like where you put the white noise in, and nice build up! Nice job on the synth bleeps. I enjoyed it.
Keep up the Good work
I pumped this out in about a day or so, so I'm probably not going to make many changes, but I'll definitely take your advice into consideration for the next time I do something like this. Thanks for the review!
Electro + Piano = FTW
This sounds soo good! its very similar to deadmau5.
I think the piano chord progression sounds really good! and the electro synth bleep with the bitcrusher sounds really good with this song!
Critique a bit:
I think at 0:30, you should add a kick and a high hat(a slight one) and start adding some drum loops in there. Maybe add a white noise right before it so it doesnt sound like yours just throwing it in there?
This song def needs to be longer! try putting in a chorus, Keep working on this, it sounds really good1
Keep up the good work.
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