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Awesome Intro!

The intro is awesome! it really makes me get pumped, but then...I feel like the drop shouldnt be as heavy...It should have some melodic components to it to make it sound more organized. And im pretty sure it will be heavy enough with your kick-ass drums haha. Maybe add a heavy saw wave using the same melodies as the intro?
One critique with your drums:
I think you should add more to your kick drum. It lacks the "thump" in it. Try adding an EQ to the kick and raise the bass.
But this sounds really good! very close to tiesto's style.
Keep up the good work.

EternalEndeavor responds:

one of the best critiques ever man, I will definetly go back and see if i can fix what you mentioned, thank you =]

Nice drums

Its a shame you dont want to finish this song it sounds great so far!
I think you should work on this once more. Try adding a bass in the beginning, maybe a low sub-bass or sine-wave synth? The drum breakdown towards the end sounds really good with the voice!
Keep up the good work!

eatmeatleet responds:

thanks, I'll consider continuing it

Nice idea!

I like the Idea! The only problem is that the whistle sounds a bit...non-professional.. You should work on the whistle part, and make sure to master it after youre done. Maybe try using a good microphone next time?
Keep up the good work!

Work On the Drums!

The song is musically pretty much complete. I think its laid out nicely, but i think you should raise the Bass on the kick drum A LOT more. For example, try adding on an EQ to the drums, and raising the bass. There will be more thump to the song, and i think it would be more of a "Dance" Song

DJSKY24 responds:

Hey, thanks for the feedback :) Your right, it definitely needs more umph

Subdrops....

The synth opening sounds really nice! i just think its a bit too long of an intro...
Im going to be specific...haha
1. When the drums come in at 0:13, instead of having a kick pattern, i think you should go straight to a standard dubstep kick and snare.
2. Like i said earlier, have the drop earlier and harder. Try putting in a reverse crash or white noise (watch youtube tutorials if you dont know how) to make your drop harder.
3. I dont know too much about dubstep drops, but i dont think the first dubstep part really matched with the high synth.
4. I also think you added too many subdrops in it....dubstep can sound a bit messy if you go overboard with it.
5. The wobbles sounds really nice with the High Synth, so keep the wobble, and change the other parts of the dubstep a bit!

Keep up the good work!

Xatar325 responds:

Thx for your feedback sir ^-^
I will work on it~
& yeah i know i dont made a very "good" drop,i'm just at the beginning of my Dubstep Era xDD ~
I will also work better on my Drops & try using a reverse crash or nosie c:

Relaxing....-_-

Gosh...dude! this is nice!
The guitar sounds match up well with the synth bleep that youre using, and i thought it sounded really professional.
I have nothing to advice for this. This is really good!
10/10
Keep up the good work!

metalheadmarch responds:

Flattered, thanks for checking it out! To be honest, I felt like I goofed up on a particular part, and didn't necessarily take my time. Despite all that, there's plenty more where that came from, rest assured. If you got some stuff I'll definitely check it out n vote!

Awesome!

This is awesome! just make it longer, and if you can, try to put vocals in! it would sound really sweet! I also think if you add violins (substitutions for a synth pad) then it would sound nice as well...
The drums sounded really nice with the piano. And the low Sine Synth sine wave was good at 0:05...a little disappointing you didnt continue with it! It sounds awesome, so continue with the bass!
Keep up the good work!

Newground's poor quality

This track was really good!! If it wasn't a low quality file (mp3) and if you can actually hear your bass, the song would have been awesome! I dont think i have anything to advice for this song...Keep up the good work!

Wobble....

I loved the piano! It was musically brilliant.
But i think you should work on the wobble a bit more, it didnt match the song.
But the intro and outro were very relaxing...keep up the good work!

bobith88 responds:

Thanks. I'm not very good at writing dubstep. This song needs more work. My friends really good at dubstep, so he's working on it right now. I'll upload the better version when it's done.

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